First, thanks for the tribute Ted and Congrats to Rochelle on the book!

Second, for visitors, submit your own poem or a short story of 100 words or less, inspired by a weekly photo in this fun, flash fiction group. You can read submissions or submit your work HERE, or click on the little blue guy at the bottom.

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One minute she was pushing a cart through the aisles, the next she was a miniature in a sick dream. The last thing she remembered was Marie, the mother of the child she hit, handing her some beads. It wasn’t her fault, the kid wasn’t in a cross walk! She did stop, and the kid was breathing, so she took off. No cops, no pay out.

She hadn’t known terror until Marie’s giant face appeared.

“You are a small person and now you shall live like one. Do your best to stay away from the bottom of my shoe.”



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Comments
  1. Sandra says:

    Seriously sinister! Nicely done, one of the few to cover the miniature shopping trolley so far.

  2. You story took me by surprise, but in a good way. As Sandra said, it was a very different perspective. A new way for wronged people to get revenge.

    janet

  3. Your chilling twist. I like the path you took in writing your entry. It’s really good.

  4. boomiebol says:

    This is good, well done

  5. A revenge indeed… And she might be worth it

  6. 40again says:

    Very sinister twist, well done,
    Dee

  7. Parul says:

    Not running off would have been wiser in retrospect..
    Like the kid’s mother’s words in the end

  8. elappleby says:

    Honey I shrunk the hit and run driver? I like it! 🙂

  9. Shreyank says:

    the second story on the miniature shopping cart.. loved it 🙂

  10. I guess that’s a kind of justice: injuring someone small and then being forced to live as someone small. Nice and creepy. 🙂

  11. Joe Owens says:

    Ah the payback will be terrifying!

  12. zookyworld says:

    What a last line! A great way to close your story.

  13. Next time I go shopping I’ll be certain not to hit any little ones. Yikes! Fun stuff, Turnip. Thanks for the congrats on the book.
    shalom,
    Rochelle

  14. Hi Turnip,
    Shades of Lilliput. A wicedly imaginately story. You let your creativity run wild here. Ron

  15. rgayer55 says:

    She better hope Marie isn’t wearing football cleats. Looks like she means to stomp a mud-hole in her. I thought it was very well written.

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