Friday Fictioneers – 3/15/13

Posted: March 15, 2013 in Uncategorized

Submit a poem or a short story of 100 words or less, inspired by a weekly photo in this fun, flash fiction group. You can read entries, or submit your own HERE, or click on the little blue guy at the bottom of the pageThank you Rochelle for keeping us going! Add you story to the Inlinkz tool so others can find your work. Simple and fun! Suggestions and pointers welcome.

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 Copyright – Lora Mitchell

Plant in place, phone on, camera ready. Mom sent the plant and mom would want proof it arrived, plus she owed her a thanks and a little gratitude. She pressed the button once, then again from a different position, gasping as a body hurtled by the window.

Recognizing the fluttering, cobalt blue robe, she knew in a heart-beat that her well-connected husband had learned about her penthouse affair with Vince. Dropping the phone she shoved some clothes and money into a tote bag before bolting down the stairs and into her future.

 

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Comments
  1. So she sent her husband flying? Nice writing.

  2. R. E. Hunter says:

    I think her husband threw her lover off the building. And she might be next! Well done.

  3. zennjennc says:

    Or did her lover throw her husband?

  4. I think Vince is history and I’m wondering whether she’ll be able to escape or not. Thank goodness Mom sent the plant or she wouldn’t even have a chance to escape.

    Have a fabulous Friday,

    janet

  5. rgayer55 says:

    Gee, I thought maybe Superman was stopping by to visit.

  6. Joe Owens says:

    I think the robe says that it is the lover that took the concrete penetrating dive. I wonder if she can out run the murderous intent her husband has inside.

  7. That was quite a jolly little piece. I am assuming she gets away!

  8. Now that’s what I call a fly-by-night affair! She’s wise to run. This one made me grin.
    Shalom,
    Rochelle

  9. elappleby says:

    nice idea – to have a body flying past the window. I enjoyed this one 🙂

  10. Dang, that’s some good reflexes to not freak out when your lover drops by like that.

  11. A lover gone, husband on the hunt. Not god not god at all. Great take.

  12. jwdwrites says:

    I love it! great story. 🙂

  13. billgncs says:

    Aha — another murder story. I am glad she has an escape plan. If she can pin the murder on him she can get the whole estate.

  14. Sarah Ann says:

    Naughty, but nice. I enjoyed the way you took run-of-the-mill actions (para 1) and made them dashed and exciting (para 2).

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