Picture It Story – 717/12

Posted: July 18, 2012 in short stories, Uncategorized, writing
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Picture it and write with ermilia. Write a paragraph of fiction to accompany the image.
Or, it can be a poem. Anyone who wants to join in is welcome. Post a link to your story in their comments.

Men forgot to breathe and woman stared as she walked through the door, clouded by a haze of smoke. A first glance would steer you towards, tart, floozy, man toy, but there was something, a small something that left you unable to avert your eyes. She mesmerized one and all as she threaded her way through the room. Men tried to focus on their dates but failed as their eyes were pulled into her aura. Every movement, every breath, every sip made a man want to possess this creature, protect it, please it. Her lips caressed the straw jutting from her glass, leaving those around her envious, wanting those lips as their own. He alone knew the secret behind those lips, and he alone would silence them before the sun rose. Smiling, he sent a drink to her table, and she, smug in the thought he remained under her spell, returned his smile. He would find silence soon.

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Comments
  1. Ermilia says:

    Dark and alluring. Nice work! I really liked the repetitive structure of this sentence ‘Every movement, every breath, every sip made a man want to possess this creature, protect it, please it.’ It worked well. Thanks for contributing to Picture it & write, I hope to see you again next week!

    – Ermisenda

  2. Anne Schilde says:

    You’ve made these lips very sexy. You had me staring as she walked through the door.

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